Neopets Application Guide
You just found your dream pet in TNO's database, making puppy eyes at you and pleading with you to take him/her home. You're all set to do just that when wait, what's this? There are rules? You have to make a what?
Yep! It's the dreaded application, a.k.a adoption request. As a retired foster mom, I understand the need for rules and applications but as a potential adopter I can also understand the sheer horror of having to go through this arduous process. I remember when I first joined TNO that I had to ask several times for help because I didn't even know what an application was!
Thanks to the kindness of my fellow members I soon found out but it was embarrassing having to ask, having to bother these nice people for something they took for granted. So, I'm going to pass on their kindness in a different way - I'm going to give you some tips on how to make an application for that dream pet. ^-^
DISCLAIMERS
No foster parent should demand money or items in exchange for a pet. This is illegal according to Neopet's rules. If a foster parent does ask you to buy their pet (or even tell you that donating to them will help your chances) then please report them to The Neopets Team.
Adoption Controversy
For as long as I've been a foster parent, there have been Neopians claiming that fostering is against Neopets' rules. I would like to point out that
in June 2006, TNT clearly stated that requiring an application is perfectly legal.
Hello =D I own an adoption adgency, and i have asked around on the boards if it is against the terms and conditions, and i have gotten a couple yeahs and no's. So i was just hoping you could clear this up for me. Thankz ~ hockeychick101
Hi there! Adoption agencies themselves are fine. Helping abandoned Neopets find caring homes is quite a good thing. :) However, often times people accept tips or payment for this service, which is not allowed. Other times, people are unaware of the fact that a pet transfer is not guaranteed and are quite upset when they put work into an application and do not get the pet. So, as long you don't ask for payment of any sort, and make it quite clear that the winning applicant is not guaranteed to get the pet once it's released into the pound, you can continue your charitable work without fear!
In other words, fostering is perfectly legal. Foster parents cannot, however, guarantee that you'll receive the pet even if they choose you as the new owner. Any experienced foster parent should have a disclaimer clearly written in their rules or on the foster pet's lookup, but not all of them do so be aware of it. Remember: Once you disown your Neopet absolutely anybody can adopt your Neopet, there is no guarantee you will be able to get your Neopet. - TNT
This hasn't really stopped the debate, however, though now it's mostly centred around the one side which claims that foster parents demand too much from applicants, and the other which believes that, having put in so much time, effort and neopoints, they should be able to choose whichever methods best suit them in order to find good homes for their pets.
If you're interested in the arguments for and against foster parenting, you can find them here and here.
About this Guide
This guide is intended to help you make your application and explain the process itself. It is not intended for you to copy or use verbatim. Creativity is 90% of the application process and every single foster parent I know will reject a copied application on principle alone.
I cannot guarantee that this guide will lead you to make a successful application. This is a very subjective business and even though I've tried to give rounded advice, what suits one may not suit another. There are no guarantees.
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The Basics
First of all, here are some basic things you should know. Then I'll explain how to do some things that are taken for granted in the fostering world.
What is an application?
This question is asked more often than you'd imagine, but it's something that all foster parents take for granted and are quite stunned to be asked.
An application or request is exactly what the words suggest - you are applying for a pet that you like, and just like an application for a job, you are trying to prove that you are the best person available.
What's the difference between a neomail and a petpage application?
Put quite simply, a neomail is a message you send to the foster parent. A petpage is way more complicated (or at least it should be).
Neomails are a short message system run on the Neopets website. They're a lot like emails but are restricted by a character limit of around 4,000 characters. Many foster parents don't allow neomail applications because of this limit, which makes neomails so short that you can't get much into them. (For help with neomail applications, try this guide. ^-^)
A petpage or webpage application is naturally much more flexible and bigger. Webpage applications, hosted on free sites like freewebs.com, geocities.com and so on, can be difficult to link to given Neopets' rule against linking to external sites. Petpages are a wonderful middle ground because they allow you the flexibility and size of a website without having to find a host or a way to link to it. (For coding help for pet/webpage applications, try CSSHelp or my Coding School.)
What goes in an application?
Pretty much anything related to the pet you want to adopt. Short stories, roleplay samples, diary entries, art, graphics... You name it. If it's about the pet and/or their future with you, then it may have a place in your application.
Remember to give full credit where it's due. Foster parents don't mind you using makeables/adoptables or premade layouts, but make sure you say clearly in your application exactly who made them, with a link to their userlookup or where you got them from. Art theft isn't tolerated. You should also be aware that many foster parents frown upon the use of someone else's written word, including poetry, journals and short stories. At least 80% of the application should really be your own work.
What's a copy-paste application?
Copy-and-paste, copy-paste or C+P applications are applications that someone else has made. They've either made them for the purpose of being used by other people or that you've stolen.
Copying someone else's work is called plagiarism and is illegal throughout most of the real world. It can have real legal repercussions, too. C+P applications are instantly rejected and your name could be blacklisted by every adoption guild and foster parent out there.
"But I edited it, is it still C+P?"
Yes. You've still taken someone else's work and are claiming it as your own. Like I said earlier, at least 80% of the application should be your own work, from scratch. That other 20% should only include graphics, artwork and the layout (and then only because we don't expect everyone to be able to draw or code like the masters). If you were to copy an application then edit it to the point where 80% of it is your work, you may as well have started from scratch anyway. =P
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The Essentials
Before you even think about starting your application, there are eight things you absolutely must know or do:
- Read the rules.
- If you genuinely don't understand the rules, politely neomail the foster parent asking them to explain them.
- Rules can usually be found on the pet's lookup, petpage, or a central site such as an adoptee ad thread in TNO's forums.
- Know the foster parent's name and how to spell it.
- Know the foster pet's name and how to spell it.
- Never, ever call the pet "it".
- Many foster parents view their fosters as much more than "mere pixels". They are characters, beloved pets, even in some cases beloved children. Treat them with respect. ^_~
- Know where and how to contact the foster parent.
- Most foster parents have more than one account but only accept neomails at their main. This is usually because they can't always check into the other accounts on a daily basis. Make sure you contact the right account - not just because the foster parent has said so, but because otherwise, it could be days before your application is read and the pet might have been adopted by then!
- Know the pet's species, colour and gender.
- If you're applying for a Mutant Draik, don't put "Hi can I have your Mutant Aisha" or "Hi, I'm applying for your Disco Draik" in your application. It tells the foster parent you don't care enough to check your application, or that you're using a copy-and-paste application.
- If you call the pet "it" or get the gender wrong, it implies you don't care enough about the pet to learn his or her gender, that you think of them as "mere pixels", or that you're using a copy-and-paste application. Always refer to them by their proper gender (his, her, him, she), by name, or at the least "them/their".
- Know the deadline!
- If you need more time, neomail the foster parent politely but don't be rude if they deny your request for the extra time.
Now that you know all this and have it memorised (or at the very least written down somewhere for easy reference), let's move on. ^^
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The Bare Bones
There are a few facts that every foster parent will want to know about you. It's entirely up to you how you include these in your application, just remember that they don't have to be in a fully factual format. ^_~ Creativity is key.
- Your neopets accounts
- We realise that many Neopians have far more accounts than they're allowed and that applicants don't always list all of them for fear of being frozen. This is understandable, but you have to realise that foster parents need to check into your pets and accounts to make sure you look after your family the way you say you do.
- If you have more than one account, try to list at least two of them as well as your main account. It works better if the pets on those accounts are permies but seeing how you treat your fosters could also affect the foster parent's decision.
- If any of your pets are ill or unhappy, or lack the basics (such as a petpet or personalised lookup) then you could find yourself at the top of the reject pile.
- Your permies
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Fosters don't matter in the application process because they're only temporary residents and won't have a long-term effect on the pet you hope to adopt. However, every foster parent wants to know how your family will welcome the pet you're applying for.
- This is a good time to practise your story-writing and roleplaying skills and you can take this opportunity to give the foster parent examples on how you plan to treat the foster pet if you get him or her.
- Try to talk about all your permies but if you can't do that, at least make sure you talk about the pets on the account you plan to adopt the foster pet onto.
- Your plans
- It's nice to know what's going to happen to our fosters, so if you plan to enter the pet into the Beauty Contest or aim for the Gourmet Club Award, make sure to mention that in your application.
- However, don't make such claims if you have no intention of doing so. Back it up with art you've drawn, trophies your other pets have earned, or a gallery full of gourmet food intended for the pet you're applying for. That way, the parent will know you mean business. ^_~
- Real life
- Some parents will want to know your real age and a little bit about your real life hobbies so they can get an understanding of how much Neopets means to you, and hopefully how long you're likely to keep playing.
- I'd suggest not going into too much detail however, just a paragraph or so, because the application is meant to be about the pet you're applying for, not about you.
Stocking Up
It's also worth doing several things outside of the application to show your dedication to the pet. That can include buying books, toys, gourmet food and any other items you think would be relevant to the pet you're trying to adopt. These things don't have to be expensive - foster parents are looking for you to lavish their pet with love not money - and you can always sell the items on if your application is rejected but it does go a long way towards proving you really do want the pet. You can also take this opportunity to delve further into the character of the foster pet as you see them. ^^
- Buy a petpet
It doesn't have to be an expensive petpet, just someone to keep the pet you're applying for company when you can't be there. If you put thought into it, the parent won't even notice if it only cost you a couple of thousand neopoints. ^_~
- Buy books
Any pet wants an education so buying a few cheap books will show your dedication to the pet's future and welfare. If you say in your application that your goal is to achieve the Book or Booktastic awards with this foster pet, then you should probably stock up on plenty of books to show you really mean it.
- Buy toys
Pets can get unhappy and playing with them helps; a variety of toys shows the foster parent that you're willing to play.
- Build a neoroom
If you have a neohome, and your permies all have their own room, then it's definitely worth making sure the pet you're applying for has one too! Furnish it nicely - it doesn't have to be expensive furniture - and arrange it in a way that you think the pet would like. Theme it in a way that matches the pet's personality (as you see them) and go that extra mile. ^^
- Dedicate your forum set, userlookups, pet lookups, shops and galleries
Dedicate as much as you can to the pet you're applying for. If you've taken the time to do this (and it can be quite time-consuming) then it shows just that little bit more determination.
Be creative!
Foster parents are obsessed with creativeness. If you're as original as possible, and let your muse take over, then you'll stand a good chance of adopting the pet. ^_^ Here are some ways in which your creativity might shine:
- Art
- The art doesn't have to actually be yours if you can't draw to save your life but spacing art through the application can help to break up chunks of text and make it easier for the foster parent to read (always a plus xD).
- Even if you fill the application with art by other people, including adoptables and makeables, it's always a good idea to attempt at least one piece of art yourself. It doesn't have to be Picasso or Michaelangelo, but it shows you're willing to try new things.
- Stories
- If you include stories in your application, they need to be your own work - unlike art. ^_~ You can have friends proof it but the writing and idea really need to be 100% yours because unlike art, which is generally viewed as an aesthetic 'extra', stories are more integral to the application itself.
- Personal tip: Don't make stories too long. While it does show dedication and lots of creativity centred around the pet you're applying for, it will also deter foster parents from reading it. If you do write longer stories, then put them in scrolling divs so the foster parent can skip them if need be.
- Roleplay samples
- Only include RP samples if you actually plan to roleplay the pet you're applying for. It doesn't matter to a foster parent if you're a totally l33t member of a totally l33t roleplay guild if you'll never actually roleplay their foster.
- Again, don't make the samples too long. ^_~
- Try to make the samples about the foster you're applying for. The aim is to prove to the foster parent that you'll be doing what you say you'll be doing with their pet, not one you already have.
- Poetry
- Poetry is actually a pretty dicey subject. It's incredibly subjective - much more so than art or stories or even roleplay - so you should think long and hard about it before including it.
- Again, if you incude poetry, it should be your own work.
- If you really want to include lyrics or poetry not written by yourself, it should be completely relevant to the pet you're trying to adopt and you should give full credit.
- In addition, I'd suggest only including one or two lines of poetry not written by yourself - a verse or two at most of the most relevant stuff.
- You can earn brownie points for writing poetry about the foster but as I said, it's incredibly subjective. I'd suggest putting in a scrolling div or separating it from the application so the foster parent doesn't have to read it if they don't want to.
- Journal
- With the advent of blogging sites like Livejournal and Xanga, there's a whole generation of surfers who have blogs coming out their ears. A lot of Neopians also have journals for their Neopets and it can be a fun way to get to know your pets by roleplaying them from a first person perspective.
- Remember if you do create a journal for the pet you're applying for that Neopets makes linking offsite difficult. ^_~
- I'd also not suggest creating a journal if you can't actually post in it frequently leading up to the foster's deadline. While you could get brownie points for the attempt, it could also backfire.
- Future petpage
- Some applications take the form of an actual petpage. This can seem presumptious if you aren't careful and put the foster parent off, but if you do it well it shows serious dedication. You're effectively putting in all the effort you plan to make after successfully adopting the pet... before you have them. :D
- TIP: The last thing foster parents want to read is "last owner was awful and dumped him/her in the pound". Remember all the effort the foster parent has and is still going to in order to find this pet the perfect, loving home. They've spent thousands - probably hundreds of thousands - of neopoints on this one pet and they don't even intend to keep him/her for themselves. They've painted or zapped the pet, read dozens of books, trained them, fed them, given them toys and possibly a neoroom. They've loved them and then, when it's time and they've found the right owner, said goodbye, trusting that new owner to love the pet and care for them. They don't want to see applicants talk about them being neglectful or abusive. ^_~
- If the personality of the foster pet (as you see them) requires a neglectful or abusive past, try to leave the foster parent out of it. xD
These are far from being the complete list of things I've seen in applications. Use your judgement on length, but try not to make the application too long. Quality not quantity is important.
Remember to check your spelling, grammar and punctuation. Don't use chatspeak, or l33t (it's annoying as hell trying to decipher them >_<)!
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Aesthetics
Foster parents generally aren't swayed by coding skills or awesome art; however, it does pay to work hard on the aesthetics of a layout. Remember though that even if you can't understand HTML and CSS, or draw a straight line, there are plenty of resources out there to help you out!
HTML is pretty easy to get the hang of, and doesn't really take that long to learn, especially with sites like CSSHelp's petpage giving little snippets of code that help you do cool things with your page. Neopets also has its own HTML guide; Lissa Explains is really helpful in explaining tables and the basics of CSS; and if that's not enough then there's even my own tutorial. (If you don't know how to actually edit your petpage, pet lookup, userlookup, shop or gallery pages, then try my Customising Neopets page. It has step-by-step instructions on the very basics of editing your Neo pages. ^^)
However, not everyone has the time to learn, so there are places where you can get premades (layouts and lookups made with the intention of having it be used by many people, not just one). If you're a member of TNO - or another guild with willing members - you can even ask for a custom lookup or layout. If you can do the graphics for it, and just have it coded, then all the better (because then it's even more your own work) - but again, not everyone can do this and again, there are people who would do it for you if asked nicely.
Be aware that the prettier and easier to read your application is, the better chance you have of being chosen as the pet's new owner. It doesn't matter if you've coded the layout, or made the graphics, or done the art (unless you try to claim credit for stuff you didn't do); but making your application look beautiful will help the foster parent to read it.
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DO NOT turn your application into some kind of disco inferno with yellow stripes and neon pink polka dots. You'll not only blind the foster parent and pet you're applying for, you'll ruin any chance you have of adopting the pet because they're in hospital having their eyes tested! Please be nice to foster parents, and make the text of your application as easy to read as possible. The less work a parent has to do to find their pet a new home, the better! ^_~
I also don't recommend that you put music on your application. At the least, if you really must, make sure the parent knows how to stop it playing. There's nothing worse than being subjected to music the parent doesn't like and can't read through. Be aware that the parent's tastes may not be your own, and what you think is lovely might make them feel sick. ^_~
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Checklist
Pretend for a moment that you've discovered your dream pet and, to your delight, discover that the deadline is 8 weeks away. Now, this will rarely happen in the real world - either the parent has set the deadline for under a month because the pet is popular, or doesn't have a deadline at all and could find an owner at any moment.
However, for the purposes of this checklist, pretend that the deadline is a full 8 weeks away. With this time frame in mind, let's create a little checklist. :D
- Week One
- Check the deadline. Write it down! Memorise it! Eat it, drink it, use it to braid your sister's hair. Remember it!
- Set your own deadline two weeks before the real one. This is so you have emergency time - time to have the application evaluated, or for your brother to kill your computer, or for your eyes to blow up from hayfever.
- Start saving your neopoints for those little extras such as books, toys and a petpet.
- Read the rules. And again. And twice more, just to be safe. Know them. Understand them. If you don't understand them, get a friend to check them and explain them to you. If that doesn't help, neomail the foster parent (this alone could take up most of your time, us foster parents being such busy bees). If they haven't replied after a week, make sure they don't have any "Hiatus!" signs up and politely nudge them. Check that you've contacted the correct account.
- Check you know the spellings of the parent and pet's names, their gender, and the pet's species and colour.
- Start collecting adoptables for your application (in case you don't get enough fanart, or just because you want to include them).
- Start asking for fanart or art trades. This usually takes a few weeks. I was incredibly lucky with Puff in that I had about twenty pieces in a matter of days but that's extremely rare. Do not leave this until the last minute!
- Week Two
- Start your layout, especially if you need to learn how to code. If you're requesting a layout from someone else, they need time to make and code it. If you're going to use a premade, you'll need time to find one.
- Start writings (poetry, short stories, etc).
- Start a journal now, if you plan to have one for the pet. You can create a free account at livejournal, blogger, or xanga. Daily entries will be a great way to get to know the pet you're applying for, and will show the parent that you mean business.
- Week Three
- How is your adoption fund coming along?
- Start thinking about which petpet you'll be buying, especially if you want to include it in your artwork and stories.
- Finish up the first drafts of your art and writings.
- How will you send the application? Obviously in a neomail, but will it be a simple "Hi, I'm applying for xxx and this is my application [link]" or something in keeping with your application itself? (Something like "Noelaniii walks up to you and peers at you from under thick black eyelashes. Apparently satisfied that you're the person she was sent to find, she hands you a scroll of ribbon-tied paper with a flourish, grinning broadly" could be fun and is much more personal than "Hi, my application is here [link]". But don't just copy my example - use your imagination. :D)
- Plan your artwork. Doesn't sound very creative, does it? But what pose(s) are you going to use? Will you be hand-drawing and scanning, sculpting from clay, cutting shapes out of toast?
- Week Four
- Finish your second drafts.
- Your art should be coming along nicely now.
- How will you introduce yourself and your application? Will you jump straight into a story, or welcome the foster parent and pet to your page first?
- Week Five
- Ask a friend to proof-read your application.
- Add the finishing touches to your artwork.
- Your art requests should be done by now. If not, politely nudge the artists in question. Don't panic, though, you still have three weeks. ^_^
- Your layout should be ready, fully coded and uploaded onto the page you're using.
- Time for a spending spree! Don't forget to put the items you buy into your gallery, that way they're safe and you can link to them so the foster parent can see them for him/herself.
- Week Six
- Furnish your neohome with the furniture you bought.
- Put the shout-outs and dedications into your userlookups, pet lookups, shops, galleries and so on.
- Get organised! See that empty layout? Time to fill it. ^_~ Check that everything works - this way if something doesn't, you have time to figure out what the problem is, or ask someone else to do it for you.
- Week Seven
- Put all the bits together, and double check that everything works, including the links and images.
- Hire a Request Evaluator.
- Week Eight
- Make any changes the Request Evaluator suggested.
- Submit your application at least two days before the deadline in case there are problems.
- DEADLINE
- It's over and you can chew your nails while you wait for the foster parent to make their decision.
- Don't pester, but keep an eye on the pet's lookup for updates. If you've heard nothing within two weeks and the pet hasn't been transferred to a new owner, politely contact the parent and ask if the new owner has been chosen yet.
- If after a month the pet still hasn't moved and you haven't heard anything, assume that you haven't been chosen and that something went wrong. You could contact the parent again if you wish, asking for them to re-evaluate your application, but that's your choice.
See how fast the time went by? There's a lot to do for any application and unless you're very lucky, it can be like drawing blood from a stone sometimes. Often, even though you really love the pet, you hit a brick wall and can't draw anything creative from them. It's best to be prepared and things to go smoothly than not have an emergency plan and nothing go right. ^_~
Don't take the time frame for granted, because parents have been known to change the deadline.
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Case Studies
Time to show you some examples to give you a better idea of what a finished application could look like. Some are mine but some TNOers were gracious enough to let me use theirs.
These case studies are examples only and should not be copied in any way, shape or form. Thanks. ^^;
- My application for muffinPuff
I made this application in four days - that's four days of virtually no sleep, and constant work. Every time someone made a new piece of art for me, it triggered off another idea. Every time I drew something, Puff evolved. But, it really wasn't my imagination that did this - it was Puff herself. The moment I saw her, she was alive. And the application reflects that - not just according to me, but to my request evaluator, and a lot of other people who saw it too. In fact, the reviews were subliminal, and the only problem was that I couldn't quite figure out how to code it so it worked in Firefox as well as Internet Explorer. However, I'd already checked with Puff's foster parent to make sure she was using Internet Explorer, so I didn't worry too much about the Firefox issue.
- Jen's Application for Gilagen
Now this is an absolutely awesome application! It's obvious that Jen put a lot of time and effort into this, and a lot of thought into the personality of the foster she was requesting. The combination of story, bio descriptions, fan art, recommendations and even the layout themed to match the story, adds real heart. You can tell after reading this that Gilagen is a beloved pet not just a way to get avatars or painted pets.
- Spoon's Application for Xiili
Spoon has a wonderful sense of humour and quirkiness that shines through in this application. The application was more than enough to sell me, but when I inspected her accounts, I noticed that almost all of her pets have their own, custom lookups (in fact, Spoon loves to play with them) and they all have individual personalities. Even though she only really has lupes and kougras, I didn't feel that it negated her love for any of them because every one is special to her, and you can see that.
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Links
This application is by far not the only one out there, nor am I claiming it to be the best. It's merely another approach to a process that can be extremely confusing at times, especially to Neopians who've never even heard of adoption before. ^^ I do strongly recommend reading as much as you can on the subject, though, so here are a few links for you. ^^
Application Guides
So you wanna apply for a pet?
Supi's Adoption Tips
Jessi's Adoption Tips
Masterpiece: A Comprehensive Application Guide
Playing your cards right
Ladie_Media's Guide to Neomail Applications
Application Resources
Customising Neopets, step-by-step instructions for the most basic of editing on Neopets
The Big List of Adoptables, a TNO resource
Application Review, a TNO resource
Get Your Application Evaluated, a member-only resource for TNOers
CSSHelp, a CSS resource
Freesong's Coding School, a series of HTML and CSS tutorials
Computer & Coding Help, a list of resources for HTML and CSS
Art Help, a list of resources for art and graphics
Freesong's HTML, HTML and CSS tutorials
Link to this guide
I would dearly love if you'd help spread the word about this guide! I know the fact it's offsite makes that difficult, so I've included a couple of buttons for use on websites and siggies and the like, as well as some larger banner-type graphics with the full link so you can post it on Neopets. ^^; Thank you!
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Contributors & Credit
This guide was written by Freesong with contributions from:
Thank you to everyone who helped out or lent me their applications. ^-^
And thank you for reading. I hope this guide proves helpful to you. ^^;
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Afterword
Just in case you're wondering what makes me qualified to write an application guide, I want to tell you a little bit about my experiences as an applicant and a foster parent.
In the three years I've been playing on neopets, I've made four applications. Two of them were rejected and one pet was adopted before the parent's deadline so I never got chance to submit. My last application was in July 2006 for muffinPuff. She came home with me in August the same year. ^-^
You can take a closer look at some of these and other applications in the case studies section of this page along. However, you should note that I've approached this guide as a foster parent, not an applicant. I think it's a good idea for you to put yourself in the foster parent's shoes and look at your application the way the foster parent will. What would you want to see in an application for one of your beloved foster parents?
Before retiring as a foster parent in early 2007, I had successfully fostered out 6 pets, with one lost in transfer. At the time all my accounts were frozen in May 2006, I had over twenty fosters in my care (I actually don't recommend it as I feel it's better to focus on one pet at a time, rather than have so many pets all vying for your attention and neopets - part of the reason I retired. xD).
I'd also like to point out that while I was a foster parent, I was quite demanding and expected a great deal from applicants who wanted my fosters, so if you could pass muster with me then you'd probably do well with many other foster parents - but as always, there are no guarantees. ^_~
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